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Usually i am put off by large words, these i understood perfectly.
I wonder what you woke up to, but agree and love the quote "we have nothing to fear but fear itself", that is not always true, ignorance is something to fear, but can be overcome.
Well written, the time you took was certainly worth it for all of us. Funny sometimes it takes awhile to find those who care the most.
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jeansaw
on September 3, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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Re: Vogue
Almost forgot to say: Welcome!!!! and thank you for visiting
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2008 at 1:42 AM
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Re: Sam
It is so frustrating when somebody won't allow us to help when we could do so, isn't it? Glad you liked this one - it was actually one of the few that I spent a long time working on
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2008 at 1:41 AM
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Re: merkie
Thanks
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2008 at 1:40 AM
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Re: So well expresed ...
Thanks Afzal50
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2008 at 1:35 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha! I was quite pleased with this one, but I did wonder if the sheer weight of long words would put people off
I am very glad you enjoyed this one.
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2008 at 1:34 AM
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Re: Vogue
The trick to that (I am told) is understanding the reasons for it, mourning the loss or aknowledging the desire behind it and moving forward aware of how you feel. I'm still working on that
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2008 at 1:29 AM
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I have a friend who goes it alone in time of trouble and I wish I could get her to understand this:
No longer sleeping, I am aware
Of the joys awaiting those who care. I could be a great help, darn it! Outstanding poem with awesome word arrangement! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 2, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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I agree with Troosha, BRAVO Encore!
posted by
merkie
on September 2, 2008 at 9:44 AM
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So well expresed ...
posted by
afzal50
on September 2, 2008 at 8:49 AM
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Lion
Emotional narcolepsy – what a fabulous inspiration for a poem which ultimate end in an awakening. Bravo!
posted by
Troosha
on September 2, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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"I've only fear to lose"!!I loved that line, it is soo true, if only we had the courage to despise our fear.
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vogue
on September 2, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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