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posted by
mejustme
on September 17, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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the day that never come....
posted by
Star5_
on September 5, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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i think we all know the feeling.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 5, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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Hi sweet lady Hope you're doing well. I missed you while I was away
posted by
Kabu
on September 5, 2008 at 3:18 PM
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Re: Re: Hi, Purple ...genio/ggXpress.........
Hi - I've done that slip myself many times ... know how pronunciation and writing can confuse ...
A sensitive and tender poem with the undercurrent power of care ...
... but I've learned to let go ... stop fighting ... for then to let the battle end by itself: the more I fight the more fight I meet/get etc - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 5, 2008 at 12:49 PM
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Haunting and affecting work!
posted by
Katray2
on September 5, 2008 at 12:19 PM
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Beautiful and touching
posted by
LillyHobbs
on September 5, 2008 at 12:17 PM
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Beautiful Poem
Your poem is beautiful
posted by
starday
on September 5, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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Re: Hi, Purple ...genio/ggXpress.........
thank you my dear....stand corrected...I apologize...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on September 5, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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Hi, Purple ...
... I just wonder about a word in your poem ... the word 'loose' (written under the picture of you) ... shall it be the word : loose - or - lose ... 'cause it looks like the word should be lose, from what I understand your poem, but maybe you mean the word loose (with dobble o) ?
The words will give different meanings - and I'm not sure how to comment if the word is wrong - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 5, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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Beautiful
and profoundly moving. I will read this one again, it is just superb. Thank you for sharing it
posted by
lionreign
on September 5, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Innocent inspiration! With TLC, BCA , “top of the stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on September 5, 2008 at 7:07 AM
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