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this is a beautiful thought to make being alone a little less lonely. Thanks you for sharing it
posted by
lionreign
on September 8, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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lovely as always my friend your words sooth the soul and inspire hope
hugs
vic
posted by
Inspired8
on September 7, 2008 at 6:01 PM
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how perfectly you said it all.....
posted by
Star5_
on September 6, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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lovely poem my friend. It sounds like you realize your resources and are not so afraid but find the sense of aloneness overpowering. My brotherinlaw once asked me "don't you talk to yourself?" Good advice sometimes.
posted by
merkie
on September 6, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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alone isn't always lonely, but it can get that way sometimes
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 6, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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You write:
"It’s hard enough to deal with life
but it’s even harder to think we are alone"
You are so true here. We need good friends to succeed in life.
posted by
Pedro88
on September 6, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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I love the moon almost as much as I love your poems... this one was special... (((((Jen)))) Its going to be Ok sweetie...
posted by
Sinome
on September 6, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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Oh, the power of the moon....
posted by
Troosha
on September 6, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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is it possible to be happy alone?
posted by
Lanetay
on September 6, 2008 at 9:12 AM
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so very powerful and beautiful and warm
posted by
skye08
on September 6, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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A strange poem with ...
... contrasts as friends as well as enemies and ... a sadness that may carry strong power of wellbeing.
I believe we're alone in the end and, to admit it make us being together with everyone ... does it sound strange ? I just find the contrast as a law of nature and it mirrors the law of humans, and vice versa.
To cling to others make us dependent of others and, in the long run, I think we should be independent ... in that way be to help for others - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 6, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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So beautiful!
posted by
Ariala
on September 6, 2008 at 5:45 AM
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