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This poem brings a smile to your face, you can't help but smile. Thank you for that.
posted by
Brickhouse
on September 19, 2008 at 1:05 AM
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BEAUTIFUL, THANKS FOR TAKING US ALONG. KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 17, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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Maybe it always should be ...
... October in the rain with love under an umbrella - 
- - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 8, 2008 at 5:23 PM
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Isn't love grand
smiling in good fortune.
posted by
merkie
on September 8, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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Love is a wondrous thing! Grand poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 8, 2008 at 7:58 AM
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Wonderful poem!
My daughter was born in october. Great work.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on September 8, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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Nice love poem ...
posted by
afzal50
on September 8, 2008 at 5:38 AM
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so beautiful!
What a wonderful love
posted by
pelagus
on September 8, 2008 at 12:16 AM
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posted by
mejustme
on September 7, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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very sweet
posted by
Lanetay
on September 7, 2008 at 2:41 PM
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Love and its indicators! Well written piece!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 7, 2008 at 2:29 PM
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There is nothing like love...is there... They say Spring is the season of love...but I beg to disagree... Fall is the one...with its golden leaves and cool winds. Great poem my friend, it captured the feeling of being in love.
posted by
Sinome
on September 7, 2008 at 10:34 AM
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Lotus_Flower, you've given us some of the ingredients of true love and
romance.
..brought a smile to my face...reminded me of that song "Sining in the Rain"..
...
posted by
Rumor
on September 7, 2008 at 8:00 AM
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Excellent!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on September 7, 2008 at 4:48 AM
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Benzinha
Thank you for the corrections :) Glad you like it
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on September 7, 2008 at 1:10 AM
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I really enjoy upbeat messages and this one is very upbeat.
Grammar changes are, in the first paragraph, "I sing and AM"
Later you say, 'You great " and you mean "you greet"
and finally it would either be "kiss increases" or "kisses increase"
otherwise, perfection again in your message and emotion communicated to the listener, reader.
As you know, I always imagine these as songs....
posted by
benzinha
on September 7, 2008 at 12:45 AM
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