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Re: Luz_Briar
I was is a melancholy mood that day... I am glad it translated well
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:55 AM
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Re: Sam
thanks Sam... I am delighted that you enjoyed this so much. I find that my poetry either plays with form or it plays with content... the next few are more focussed on content, but I will return to my experiments soon. Especially after this sort of encouragement
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:50 AM
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Re: Lion
It does push towards being a song, doesn't it? Glad you liked this one, Troosha
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:35 AM
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Re: A great love poem ...
Thank you genio - I am glad that you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:35 AM
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Re: EX_TURPI
thank you - I am glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:25 AM
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Re: Such a sweet poem! "She" is very lucky to have someone like you!
Thanks Tyleness, but I am pretty sure that I am the luckier one... after all I have somebody who inspires me to write.
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:16 AM
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how painful
sad poem, lionreign. very lyrical
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 14, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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I love this experimentation! It was so clever to build the last stanza within the poem. I am pleasantly astonished! BRAVO! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 12, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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Lion
I made up my own tune to accompany your lyrics. Great compassion….
posted by
Troosha
on September 12, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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A great love poem ...
... sensitive and sincere - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 12, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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Very great lyrics; great expression of the soul.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on September 12, 2008 at 7:36 AM
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Such a sweet poem! "She" is very lucky to have someone like you!
posted by
tyleness
on September 12, 2008 at 6:39 AM
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