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Ciel
Excellent! You have captured
one aspect of city life brilliantly...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 22, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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Lovely,Ciel, thanks! I empathise.
posted by
Uistlady
on September 22, 2008 at 1:35 AM
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Brilliant observation beautifully expressed. There is a lot of truth in what you say, however, I have to admit I am a city girl. I love the bright lights, the hustle and bustle, the feel of pure energy. Actually, you have inspired me to try a "Counterpoem" so to speak. Thanks for stopping by.
posted by
vogue
on September 22, 2008 at 12:17 AM
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I like this poem!
I can picture the artist sitting in a cozy nook with a mug of cooling coffee on the table, letting her senses lead her into this poem, deeply engrossed!
posted by
KaBooM62
on September 21, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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