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Dear Jen, your words are so that they take me with you in that winding road of life, they inspire me and let me understand my life a little better, but please remember to take care of yourself and not get too excited...your passion takes the best of you and you forget to rest. Take care of you and thanks
posted by
Sinome
on October 2, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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Like your finding infinity
in a circular ending.
posted by
cpklapper
on October 1, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Insightfully done!
posted by
Katray2
on October 1, 2008 at 10:42 AM
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I like the puzzle of life, the rewarding feeling of happiness when you find a piece you have been looking for.
Thank you for yet another great poem ;)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 1, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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As always excellent
What a beautiful and loving spirit radiates from your words and your BEING
posted by
skye08
on October 1, 2008 at 5:28 AM
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Like this one--kind of a peek-a-boo into the nature of our reality. Lot's of times reading you feel like I'm in a painting (abstract/concrete)with lines starting out horizontally then jutting out perpendicularly(or some such angle). Feel you got close to something, here (at least for me), but wonder about the title, for is not a painting the design of its own inner information? Don't know if this implies an epistomologial leap (how we approach and think about things) but why wouldn't attunement to the design not be complete? And how could there be a puzzle when all the parts fit and feel comfortable with eachother? Understand the juxtaposion here, and how you like to rub two thoughts together...anyway, just a thought
John
posted by
jfm32
on October 1, 2008 at 3:30 AM
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Good to see you writing again. Round in circles but always getting more adept at life ..cul de sacs are only side trips?
posted by
merkie
on September 30, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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this one sounds like it could be recited aloud to great effect
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 30, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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if you say so.....
posted by
Star5_
on September 30, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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Wise words expressed so beautifully . Bravo my friend!
posted by
Sinome
on September 30, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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You are right and I agree with you totally on this point . Life is just a
puzzle and nothing else.
posted by
afzal50
on September 30, 2008 at 10:44 AM
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I've wound up in the cul-de-sac several times.
posted by
Brickhouse
on September 30, 2008 at 10:40 AM
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