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- Go to ~~~~~in the ocean of faint restraint, corrupting me to become hostile.~~~~~
some things are not negotiable....
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 5, 2008 at 11:53 AM
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pain hits us differently, but nice picture, I love the rain
posted by
Lanetay
on October 5, 2008 at 9:55 AM
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If you don't ask me I know ... if you ask me I know not .
posted by
afzal50
on October 5, 2008 at 3:48 AM
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so beautiful
posted by
Star5_
on October 4, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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When you know you see the light put a lovely name on it. Give up the hurt and pain of the past give them to God and ask him to take them far away from you. Be blessed. Lovely poem.
posted by
Justi
on October 4, 2008 at 9:05 PM
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ooops sorry I hit the wrong button 
please delete the previous 
anyway...Your poem is as usual beautifully written, poignant and deep. "have been seeing the light but I don’t seem to recognize it" How many times has that happened to me and I am sure many out there. We see it ...we know is there but we do not realize is for us. Great job Jen... as always...
posted by
Sinome
on October 4, 2008 at 11:09 AM
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Your poem is as usual poignant and deep. "
I have been seeing the light but I don’t seem to recognize it"
posted by
Sinome
on October 4, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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Graditude grows and returns even more things to be grateful for
We attract what we radiate. It's better to be in graditude than a place of lowly and unworthy self esteem. Very thought provoking write.
posted by
skye08
on October 4, 2008 at 10:25 AM
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