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9Star, Davi, and Rumored
glad you enjoyed this experiment. and Rumored, i'm sure you'll think of something great for "Ghost Drive"
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 6, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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Re: Luz, this is really... strange--
Thanks! it's an honor to have anything of mine compared to the musical Sweeney Todd. quite possibly the best musical play ever written! Thanks for the inspiring prompt
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 6, 2008 at 4:21 PM
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Luz, I agree it's amazing how a one word prompt can lead to a story
like this..well done!.
...(I have in the back of my mind a prompt that won't go away "Ghost Drive")..
..all I need to do is find the time to do something with it, preferably before Halloween..:)
posted by
Rumor
on October 6, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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What a route!
Now that was good.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on October 5, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 5, 2008 at 5:18 PM
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Luz, this is really... strange--
Reminds me a bit of Sweeny Todd!
It reads rather like a poem without line-breaks, a ballad of the old west sorta thing... In fact, the repetition threw me at first, until I started regarding it as a ballad.
Thanks for responding to the prompt! 
posted by
Ciel
on October 5, 2008 at 4:03 PM
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