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The Genre you choose to write things about intrigues me... Its really nice!
Melodramatic... ;)
Luv,
Laxman
posted by
laxman_v
on October 11, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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Yes, the life is ...
... a stumbling path that too often have no answers, no meaning and, even too exhausted and tragic to be worthwhile living ... but ... it's development all the time ... if we can "see" it - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 11, 2008 at 10:08 AM
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PS: good write, but more importantly an insight into this Sacradotal activity, this wonder, how to be alive.
posted by
jfm32
on October 10, 2008 at 8:40 PM
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I don't know how to say this, sometimes I don't know what the hell you're talking about, but I always marvel how you do it! As I told you before, reading you is to each time walk into an original canvass, never knowing what to expect (and I always feel more comfortable with someone sliding into left base from an alternative frequency), which makes me feel alive.
I liked the play in this one..."caught...naught"...and 3 lines later, "I thought"...(oh, and I'm thinking, an imbedded onomonpea! How wonderful, this one's going to be fun!).
That's until I met the mantra, and interestingly placed as a swivelpoint, and the consciousness of this play: "not nature's rhyme"
(and therefore this meter of this poem--a little broken into new thought)--no longer magical, but rhetorical, a "unilateral sonata...mistakenly pondered because (it too?) was born from the womb"
But is this not the question you are negotiating? For what is inner being without its outter twin? Forget the prophesy. And if they ever meet up, excpect a big implosion!
To sum up, it's not your voice that's unusual, perhaps it's your whole being, and how to think thru everything as an artist, if that pertains to you, and re-present it in your own unusal way.
posted by
jfm32
on October 10, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Changing your thoughts can change your reality
even when things may be changing around you that may not be what or the way you want, you can change how it affects you and release the negative energy. A very powerful poem, indeed.
posted by
skye08
on October 10, 2008 at 10:52 AM
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I read it as awesome mind-boggling personal poetic verse love*** w/TLC, BCA, Bill*s Wave*** Blog on!***
posted by
BC-A
on October 10, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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Purple
Always such sadness or disappointment in your words but you certainly carry you reader with you through your thoughts….
posted by
Troosha
on October 10, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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you have such a way with words, dear. You have a
gift indeed, taking us there with you every step of
the way
posted by
Samantha39
on October 10, 2008 at 8:06 AM
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People change... sometimes for the better
Great poem as always sweetie :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 10, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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