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Reminds me of days when I wished it was cloudy & raining... A good haiku says it all without using a pageful of words. Nice one.
posted by
JDM1991
on February 10, 2009 at 4:30 PM
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Naut
This moved me too.. why was your heart blue hun?
We have had a wonderfully crisp and clear day here today, one of those days it's good just to be alive under that sky.
posted by
mneme
on January 6, 2009 at 10:18 AM
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Now i think you really pulled this one off pretty well. Great!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 15, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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Hey Naut...
...I have always been impressed with your Haikus and this one is especially captivating. The last line is a brilliant touch!
Thanks for visiting and I'll be around as time allows.
Take care.
posted by
metalrat
on October 28, 2008 at 6:55 PM
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Nautikos
Can't believe I just discovered this......so beautiful.....I so love Fall....your heart is too warm to ever be such a cool shade as blue....you described all the colors so accurately within the confines of haiku......you really should do more of these....really....you should...
posted by
Krisles
on October 27, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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Personally autumn
In this case, you blended well the blue heart to the colors of fall...
posted by
1AMIHAN1
on October 21, 2008 at 3:55 AM
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Wow... did not know you wrote poetry as well... Wonderfully telling Haiku... the tears of the clown ? ... ((((( NAut))))))))
posted by
Sinome
on October 17, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Blue . . and beautifully heartbreaking haiku.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 13, 2008 at 4:17 PM
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Wonderful haiku Sir! You have inspired me to take a long walk in the fall foliage today.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 13, 2008 at 4:14 AM
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This crimson on woods haiku is most excellent. Thank you for sharing
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 12, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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TAPS, thank you very much! It's turning out to be a gorgeous Thanksgiving weekend, and in spite of all our current problems, we do have a lot to be thankful for...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 12, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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Thanks, Shelly! I really appreciate it that you like my poetic efforts!
posted by
Nautikos
on October 12, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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Thanks, TAPS! I'll make an effort...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 12, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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Happy a Thanksgiving 
posted by
TAPS.
on October 11, 2008 at 5:50 PM
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Naut, you are so good at Haikus! Shelly
You know I am shameless in promoting you work so I have taken a link Bro. Love you!
posted by
sam444
on October 11, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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I know that's true for some, but I find it hard to be blue when the sun shines so brightly and the autumn colors grace the blue sky. The beauty of this time of year makes surreal the rocking breaking news that invades our peace.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 10, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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