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Your poem is amazing as always ;)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 15, 2008 at 10:51 AM
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It's never too deep dear Jen
we just need to have the faith to plunge in again and again; excellent piece my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
on October 15, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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how desolate for her

posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 14, 2008 at 9:37 PM
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Jen this was wonderful! I never get tired of reading your poems...you offer so much and such variety of concepts... Bravo my friend!
posted by
Sinome
on October 14, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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Sometimes the surface is warmth personified but the deep reveals ice particles. Why is love blind?? Hi Jen good to catch up with you

. I just found your calling cards. I tried to send you A birthday card but the email did not go through.Belated greetings to you and many HAPPY returns!!
posted by
merkie
on October 14, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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It's in the depth we discover what life is ...
... but it takes time to understand it -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 14, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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I like the depth and dimension of your thoughts >>
posted by
afzal50
on October 14, 2008 at 10:10 AM
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You are a great thinker.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 14, 2008 at 9:41 AM
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It wasn't adulterous but

you have described it so perfectedly.
posted by
skye08
on October 14, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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