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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 16, 2008 at 3:02 PM
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wow!
Clever and effective - not sure how you did it, but those few lines resonate loudly with me. Great poem!
posted by
lionreign
on October 16, 2008 at 2:29 AM
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Luz, its interesting how leaves take on beautiful colors like red, almost
like shrouds, before they actually die...

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posted by
Rumor
on October 15, 2008 at 3:47 PM
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It feel residual, the effect! Great imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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It feel residual, the effect! Great imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on October 15, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 14, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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