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Great poem Lotus... I guess it is a decission only you can make ... I do not envy you though... Good luck :-)
posted by
Sinome
on October 16, 2008 at 10:34 PM
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another great poem about being torn
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 16, 2008 at 2:47 PM
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Your poem strikes me like awesome and so personal that the language allows me to feel your conflivt love*** w/TLC, BCA *** Bill*s Wa
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posted by
BC-A
on October 16, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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Believe me my friend I have been there.........
I believe I made the only decision possible - to break my own heart for which I am responsible; very well done; many blessings, thanks and good luck
posted by
mariaki
on October 16, 2008 at 3:59 AM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 15, 2008 at 10:48 PM
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Congratulations! This is awesome! I love it to pieces. Sterling imagery! The close is just perfect! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2008 at 5:58 PM
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Wishing you health and happiness
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 15, 2008 at 3:30 PM
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Choose the path of greater goodness and most heart
That little voice inside, listen to it and remember it is awfully soft..
posted by
mysteria
on October 15, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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SINCE YOU ASKED, IF IT WERE ME, I WOULD BREAK MY OWN, ON MY OWN HEART I CAN WORK TO MEND , BUT I HAVE NO POWER TO DO SO FOR ANOTHER, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 15, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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Every desicion ...
... have consequences whether it's written in the stars or we write it ourselves in our diary - is there difference between the ego and the heart ... even if you know, maybe you don't want to know but ... it's ourself to decide which colour we try to create for the day tomorrow - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 15, 2008 at 12:38 PM
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Take care with your decison...
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 15, 2008 at 12:30 PM
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Hard question ! Take care..
posted by
merkie
on October 15, 2008 at 12:15 PM
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oh no!!!!!!!
I know I can't tell you what to do but I just came out of that kind of relationship. Please spare yourself the worst heartbreak ever!!!! Truth needs to win every time. It is not natural for people to live a lie and a lie breaks and crushes everything that is good ...
posted by
AnaEmiliaMarina
on October 15, 2008 at 9:51 AM
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So passionate and so fine a question ...
posted by
afzal50
on October 15, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Great conflict, food for stories and novels an yet you have captured the essence in a single poem.
posted by
vogue
on October 15, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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