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Re: Sinome
Thanks! I really felt in the mood to entertain when I wrote this one, so I am glad to see that it did
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:54 AM
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Re: Luz_Briar
Thanks - glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:53 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks, you always seem to find the line I am most pleased with - I felt that really described the sensation of nice dreams
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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Re: Great poem!
Thanks, and welcome.
That's one solution, but I don't fancy Summer's 5am starts
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:51 AM
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Re: Merkie
My rage is seasonal - in Spring and Summer i leap from my rest eager to start the day, Autumn and Winter I want to sleep more
Glad you enjoyed this
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:50 AM
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Re: Great writing....
Thank you, and welcome
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:28 AM
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Re: A very sneaky punchline my dear Lion.............
Thank you, my friend, I thought I would write something to evoke laughter for a change :D
posted by
lionreign
on October 17, 2008 at 4:21 AM
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Great poem! Humor and heart...what else can a reader ask for... Loved the ending... Excellent work!
posted by
Sinome
on October 16, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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this has everything! beautiful imagery, depth, And Humor!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 16, 2008 at 2:19 PM
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I loved this line and so sorry you had to wake up. lol
My heart and spirit unencumbered, sam
posted by
sam444
on October 16, 2008 at 11:11 AM
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Great poem!
...and an accurate observation of us all... I've don't use my clock anymore. I placed my bed before the east side window... sunlight is a much quieter waking device...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on October 16, 2008 at 11:09 AM
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Good one. I thought you7 might throw it against thwe wall, How dare it disturb the peace?
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 10:40 AM
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Great writing....
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 16, 2008 at 5:25 AM
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A very sneaky punchline my dear Lion.............
cleverly done and very well written my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on October 16, 2008 at 5:16 AM
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