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THANK YOU...

 I dig your stuff too!!!

Max

posted by contagion_publishing on October 19, 2008 at 2:33 AM | link to this | reply

I speak for the depressed,
untreated depression,
lost love,
the cry's of black sheep,
the life under rocks.
I crawl to redemption !
Only God can judge me !
born to sin my fate begans at desiny !
A piece of the puzzle!
poetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The whole poem was amazing but these lines I loved!  Excellent work Less...

 

 

posted by Sinome on October 18, 2008 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

I love the Langston Hughes in your work. I wish I had him that deep in me! This is outstanding! I love that God is our judge! I am sending my email address and address to you very soon. Love you so much! sam

posted by sam444 on October 17, 2008 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

WOW

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