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Re: Sam444
thanks Sam, funny how it is the simplest of things which can inspire the most heartfelt poems, isn't it?

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 2:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Luz_Briar
Thanks Luz,  I tend to be quite happy on this topic

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 2:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lovely poem
Thanks malcolm - and you are very welcome

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 2:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow!
Thank you MasonGarrett, that is one of the biggest compliments you could give me

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 2:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha, I was inspired...

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautifully written....
Thank you Symphony

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

This warmed my heart: This second dawn painted my skies:
Sourced in your smile of clear delight
And the sunlight of your eyes.
     Painted my skies! Amen! sam

posted by sam444 on October 17, 2008 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

almost musical. very joyful too

posted by Luz_Briar on October 17, 2008 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem
Thanks for writing it here

posted by malcolm on October 17, 2008 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely

posted by malcolm on October 17, 2008 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

Wow!
...I'm printing this one out...

posted by MasonGarrett on October 17, 2008 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

Lion
Awww...  the second dawn in the sunlight of her eyes.  How beautiful is that? 

posted by Troosha on October 17, 2008 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written....

posted by _Symphony_ on October 17, 2008 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply