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Intriguing and unique . . you've stirred me up with this Direct Hit. Love this poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 19, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 19, 2008 at 4:31 PM
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Laden with excellent imagery and the conclusion speaks volumes! Excellent Jack. How is life treating you? sam
posted by
sam444
on October 19, 2008 at 1:16 PM
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Poignant and powerful poem... Loved the ending...Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on October 19, 2008 at 11:52 AM
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Really powerful . . . "The only way to live is ragged and torn" . . . just excellent . . . thank you . . .
posted by
Soaker
on October 19, 2008 at 11:47 AM
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Jack
So I’ll bleed and breathe,
On broken bones and in a loose weave Yup... I think that's when you drew me in completely. Oh, wouldn't we all like to fly. Another great piece!
posted by
Troosha
on October 19, 2008 at 11:27 AM
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