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Hi Dolly, the metaphor of 'changing' seasons ... and
A question brilliantly posed in a poem that just flowed
. Happy Deepavali and thank you for wishing me well.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 29, 2008 at 8:36 AM
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Beautiful images and poignant thoughts in this beautiful poem. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on October 28, 2008 at 9:59 PM
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The shadow before the new door opens.Images of frustration to the poet!
posted by
merkie
on October 27, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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Excellent pondering! I adored the imagery very much! A clever, delightful poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 27, 2008 at 1:11 PM
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Your imagery reminds me of the field scene in the Alfred Hitchcock film North by Northwest. In it Cary Grant stands in an empty field until the would-be assasin plane flies over him low. Similarly your language blows me away love*** w/tlc, bca ***** bill*s wave:: fly on
posted by
BC-A
on October 27, 2008 at 9:52 AM
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"Ink starves", now that's an image I find absoluely wonderful. Well done.
posted by
vogue
on October 26, 2008 at 9:15 AM
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Open
Open you're heart for the season's change... and don't forget to refill the ink... because you have to write some more.... nice, no great post...
posted by
1AMIHAN1
on October 26, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 26, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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oh.. I liked the ending.. very nice.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 26, 2008 at 6:13 AM
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