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Loving and asking forgiveness truth in a stand for the heart. Nice!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 14, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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Lotus
There's a reason for that saying about hindsight being 20/20.....but, being the creatures that we are, would we really change anything if we were given another chance? We have no idea what we would really do, we can dream but we could never know..... Good write!
posted by
Krisles
on November 1, 2008 at 6:41 PM
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"if only that day could be today" - how many times have we all said that in
one regard or another...very bittersweet Lotus_Flower..
.very good as always..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 30, 2008 at 5:02 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 29, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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Thoughtful writing...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 29, 2008 at 5:51 PM
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I love the concept and expressed in poetry it’s beautiful w/TLC, BCA **** Bill*s Wave:: Blog on
posted by
BC-A
on October 29, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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benzinha Re: Your editor says
Thank you for correcting me :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 29, 2008 at 10:23 AM
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heartbreaking words!
This feeling is so devastating
posted by
pelagus
on October 29, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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Nostalgic indeed ..
posted by
afzal50
on October 29, 2008 at 3:52 AM
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How I have had these thoughts pass through my head too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 28, 2008 at 11:59 PM
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choosing, better spelling maybe??
posted by
benzinha
on October 28, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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Your editor says that the years HAVE passed.....and then
remembers regrets because of what you wrote. They are part of youth and life. Learning from them teaches us to never repeat the anguish again by chossing better the second and third time in life.
You remind me, regrets, I have a few..............but I have released them like wreaths of flowers on a swift moving river.........
posted by
benzinha
on October 28, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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YOU COULD LET THIS BE THE DAY THAT YOU MOVE ON, THERE ARE OTHER HANDS THAT NEED TO BE HELD, I WILL PRAY FOR PEACE FOR YOU, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 28, 2008 at 2:56 PM
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Lotus
Until I read you comment back to Sunny I couldn’t decided if this was a poem about losing a man from your life or losing a loved one who has died. When we lose someone there are always the “I wish I had…” thoughts but unfortunately there’s no turning back the hands of time. Sad piece but as FaneXe said, it also one that conveys a sense of healing.
posted by
Troosha
on October 28, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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Excellent job conveying how much this person is missed in your life. I felt the sadness, but also the awareness that you have from your loss.
posted by
godsome
on October 28, 2008 at 1:52 PM
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Many of us wish we could turn back the pages that were written and do it a little differently. For many, there could have been no other way cuz we didn't write the script! There will be regrets. That's good because it informs the future!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 28, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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and let that day be today, and beautiful poem like this makes it feel that way.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 28, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Sunny Re: Very lovely... and a little sad.
Yes, it is sad when you wait untill it is too late. Today I miss my friend terribly... maybe because it is around this time of the year she got sick
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 28, 2008 at 11:25 AM
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Very lovely... and a little sad.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on October 28, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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