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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha - me too. I think I have some growing to do before that kind of relationship can be a reality, but I am working on that
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:39 AM
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Re: I found this really moving
Thank you very much. It is important to me that my work is accessible because the meaning is the important thing - the verse is mostly a way to communicate it
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:37 AM
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Re: Luz_Briar
Thank you - I have had relationships like the first stanza's and they have all failed. Now I am hoping for one like the second
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:31 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you - I was feeling inspired by perceived change, or at least the beginnings of it
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:26 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you, Sinome, I am especially glad you enjoyed this one
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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Re: true thoughts mafe lovely
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:21 AM
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Re: the best way...
I believe so... harder to achieve though
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:19 AM
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Re: Yes ... that's right ...
Absolutely genio, as soon as you need your partner to feel whole you begin to kill the fires
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:16 AM
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Re: OTA
Thanks!
posted by
lionreign
on October 31, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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Lion
“Uninspired” love is kind of stagnant place to be. Your second verse conveys your longing for something deeper and more meaningful. I hope you find it or can create it.
posted by
Troosha
on October 31, 2008 at 6:41 AM
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I found this really moving
and your verses are so accessible which I believe poetry really should be. Thanks also for you comment on my blog.
posted by
malcolm
on October 31, 2008 at 5:35 AM
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elogant way of saying this. and refreshing to read a realistic love poem like this.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 30, 2008 at 11:37 PM
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And we might find a way to be
More in love than we ever knew
This is a wonderful close with such strength! It truly made the poem very effective in producing awesome imagery with the references to one another! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 30, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Lovely Lion... heartfelt and so romantic :-)
posted by
Sinome
on October 30, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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true thoughts mafe lovely
posted by
mysteria
on October 30, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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the best way...
posted by
Star5_
on October 30, 2008 at 6:09 PM
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Yes ... that's right ...
... both independent 'cause, then the fire can burn without being dependent of the other one to keep it alive ... that makes projections and blaming and; it's the start of turning off the fire, and love - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 30, 2008 at 3:16 PM
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I like this.. maybe we all need a good shake up in a relationship sometimes.
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 30, 2008 at 2:43 PM
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