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Re: merkie
i just talk to a lot of wise people and read clever books, it's hard not to learn a little that way
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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Re: Hardilaziz
Exactly! thanks for stopping by
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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Re: Luz_Briar
If we let it, time saving will rush us through life... i choose not to
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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Re: Fantastic last verse
thanks for coming to share with me! glad this hit a cord malcolm
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha! i am very glad you like this one
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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Re: True to a T my friend!
Thank you, dear one, and Gandalf's words did help the inspiration on this one
Well spotted!
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you, especially for the comments on the punctuation - that is very helpful as I am working on my pacing at the moment
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2008 at 8:14 AM
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Always a wise outlook you share lion. Excellent!
posted by
merkie
on November 8, 2008 at 2:01 PM
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Savour the moment. That's what you have.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 8, 2008 at 3:43 AM
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great reminder. everything is so hectic and fast-paced these days
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 7, 2008 at 5:22 PM
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Fantastic last verse
in particular. It is so fashionable to say that we are 'time poor' but we can all do something about it. These words really resonated with me and thanks for sharing.
posted by
malcolm
on November 7, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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Lion
This is where most of us go wrong. We fail to: Experience the present
Before it's lost to the past. I loved the flow as well as the message of this poem!
posted by
Troosha
on November 7, 2008 at 6:26 AM
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True to a T my friend!
we are all so busy rushing somewhere all the time; the intro actually reminded me of Gandalf's words.........
super piece; many blessings and thanks and have a 'wiz' of a weekend
posted by
mariaki
on November 7, 2008 at 6:02 AM
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This is awesome for we forget to pause! I loved the cadence and I thought the punctuation was perfectly placed! It had a bubbly kind of pace to it! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 6, 2008 at 9:55 PM
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