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a lesson learned
always be prepared
take a pen and pad with you
where ever you go
Naut, it is such a shame when we lose our words...
sometimes the Muse tests us
posted by
muser
on June 4, 2009 at 1:02 PM
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Some of us should always carry a voice recorder
or a chorus following close by...
"Brave Sir Robin...!"
posted by
Ciel
on December 24, 2008 at 7:38 AM
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Speechless!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 15, 2008 at 7:12 PM
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This haiku #22 is Brilliantly twisted for sure.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 16, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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Very cool. When I first read it my mind added the fourth line.
I
n my car today
I thought a brilliant haiku
I could not write it
Can you?
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 14, 2008 at 9:21 AM
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That was cute!
posted by
shelly_b
on November 13, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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Now that sucks...
...but you got a good haiku out of it.
posted by
metalrat
on November 10, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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Naut
Those
brilliant thoughts in a car can be most annoying because I inevitably forget them by the time I get to a pen and paper. You, however, seemed to have remembered. Too funny...
posted by
Troosha
on November 9, 2008 at 2:32 PM
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NAUTIKOS
Clever as ever
Naut will have the solution
Also the last word
posted by
Krisles
on November 9, 2008 at 2:01 PM
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Great unassuming haiku... :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 8, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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This is so cool! To do without doing is astounding! I wish you would write more poetry, you have an untapped gift my dear Bro! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on November 8, 2008 at 6:58 PM
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U forgot it by the time u got to the key-board
posted by
Straightforward
on November 8, 2008 at 8:36 AM
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HAHAHAHA, You did, Nautikos. This is it.
I hate it when I have a thought and cannot write it down, because later I can never remember, not even what it was about.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 8, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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What.. keeping it to yourself? LOL.. you are so clever
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 8, 2008 at 5:33 AM
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Inspirations arrive at the oddest times. A good haiku written!
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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