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Hands Down! Ienjoyed your concept, content and your style flows. Awsome!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 26, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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uncle say, why are your single? Why live alone?"
That sounds like my nieces, and nephews. When they came to visit, last Spring. I rather wait for the best, than jump into some mess.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 13, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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Hey! This is good stuff! Except for minor disjoints, this is as good as can be found anywhere!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 10, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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Your poetry is incredible! Awesome imagery and the rhyme scheme suits the cadence perfectly! I am so happy you are writing on Blogit! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 8, 2008 at 7:10 PM
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What a sad story... I hope is fiction or at least based on an old memory... for I would not want you to be the one that "is single, lives alone, has no babies, has no home" ...
:-( I was thrilled my single rose enchanted you. Thank you for this beautifly sad story .
Take care of you and don't forget to smile.
posted by
Sinome
on November 8, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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