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Nice write for the form of present heart mind and soul. Great content.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 27, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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Time in velocity wow ...clinging to a piece of life.. Eternally. Great images Itza
posted by
merkie
on November 18, 2008 at 9:53 PM
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I really like the rhythm and pace of this one, and this subtle feeling that I'm turned inside out, then outside in again. Not sure what I saw, but really liked the feeling. I also like the feeling of being secure within a poem/voice, and that a writer can be in control of his/her construct in terms of language, timing and intent. Other than that, I guess I liked it (lol)....
posted by
jfm32
on November 17, 2008 at 4:37 PM
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