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I think of your pretty words daily. They inspire me to write pleasantly.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 21, 2008 at 4:01 AM
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Wow, this one was unique - it was very compelling and mysterious. Thank you for sharing
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 20, 2008 at 9:29 AM
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Serenity mixed with angst
I felt the serenity of the window and the view, and in that, I also felt the angst of wondering...of not being sure. This was really a good write. Thanks for sharing it.
posted by
Imaginerain08
on November 18, 2008 at 2:52 PM
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What perfect imagery....the scene so perfectly set. I think personal thoughts are very important and should stay that way.....it's more when I catch myself being looked at that I wonder what is in the mind of another.
posted by
Krisles
on November 18, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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Poignant verse! I love the backdrop and the setting of this poem of contemplation of another! Awesome again my darlin'! Pluto times 4 lol Sammy
Hey! I am caught up!
posted by
sam444
on November 18, 2008 at 2:41 PM
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Very well expressed. Sometimes private thought should be just that - private. I hope it doesn't happen every day though :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on November 18, 2008 at 10:19 AM
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So near and yet so far. You never can be so alone as when you are next to a person.
posted by
vogue
on November 18, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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What a wonderful poem!
I can feel what you're saying.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 18, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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Sinome
Such a tender moment.... questions which may not have answers.
posted by
Troosha
on November 18, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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Again so very beautifull Sinome! Whatever the reason you/he are unable to
communicate--he must-I feel certain-
feel what you are expressing!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 18, 2008 at 7:29 AM
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My wife
often wonders where I am, even though I'm lying right next to her
posted by
malcolm
on November 18, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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Wow.. such a clear view out the window and so many questions. Has time stopped? Flowing
with so much sadness and passion.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 18, 2008 at 5:39 AM
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Perfect imagery my dear Sinome!
I can easily picture this scene thanks to your vividness in description; you know, we all need relfective me time sweetie; if he could put into words his thoughts he would I am sure; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 18, 2008 at 4:22 AM
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I can see you sitting there, looking out the window at him, wishing you could know. Perhaps it's better that you don't. I think that it is very hard for men and women to understand each other. What if you knew what he was thinking and misunderstood the significance. Men and women come from different base settings and arrive at different destinations, all while in the same surroundings. Maybe it's good that we have thought privacy.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 18, 2008 at 12:50 AM
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posted by
lestate7
on November 17, 2008 at 9:51 PM
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Bo knows...
Wish he would tell me. =^..^=
think sometimes he tries. 
posted by
Whacky
on November 17, 2008 at 8:44 PM
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I wish I knew everything. I am a fool unable to answer the barrage of queries from my wife and my children. I dont know why people cheat, abuse and hurt others.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 17, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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A lonely longing when you are not able to communicate your thought and love.Love hurts.Well done Marta Wishes remain I hope yours come true .
posted by
merkie
on November 17, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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Kudos
I wanted to let you know that I really liked this poem, the imagery was wonderful and I related to it well
posted by
calia14
on November 17, 2008 at 6:48 PM
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