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It's a thin line don't forget what side of the line you suppose to be on.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 14, 2008 at 5:51 AM
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bunch of thanks to you, you are pretty right in there madamoiselle,
felt like confused of myself sometimes and then...i just dance with life as it is..
posted by
zhemarie
on November 22, 2008 at 12:39 AM
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me too has the same dilemma of interpreting haikus..but mine well, i know it pretty well. 
readers have a lot of interpretations..depends of readers perception. none is wrong anyway, unless you know pretty well the author, it helps.
posted by
zhemarie
on November 22, 2008 at 12:37 AM
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Re: My continuation to ur Haiky :-)
lovely suggestion..thanks, il put it this way i guess..
Then i forcely chopped
The intangible facade
And become myself.
(i wanted to be myself, no pretensions, no hesitations...
)THANKS!
posted by
zhemarie
on November 22, 2008 at 12:33 AM
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it wasnt purposely made to, but im glad it came out like that
and somebody appreciates it.
posted by
zhemarie
on November 22, 2008 at 12:26 AM
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iRe: Marie
i cling to the positive side so i prefer embracing my sanity..
posted by
zhemarie
on November 22, 2008 at 12:22 AM
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Both haiku impress their special messages. First becoming aware of you -second loving life as a crazy dance. Splendid Marie
posted by
merkie
on November 20, 2008 at 8:59 PM
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Interesting stuff! I always get trouble interpreting haikus!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 20, 2008 at 8:44 PM
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My continuation to ur Haiky :-)
Then I chopped
the facade
and became myself
posted by
Straightforward
on November 20, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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posted by
Samantha39
on November 20, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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that rhyme was nifty in there. lovely haiku
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 20, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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Marie
Embracing our sanity (or insanity)....
posted by
Troosha
on November 20, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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