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Wonderful layout a magicail and powerful than a soft touch freedom's soul
posted by
Mystereo
on December 6, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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Very sensual DAvid... your repetition of the "thinking of you" conveys the intense feeling you feel for her...and how she is in everything you do, see, hear, taste... you are inmersed in her and drenched with the essence of her...its so romantic...
posted by
Sinome
on November 21, 2008 at 3:15 PM
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Hey I got a secret for you......." I KNOW TWO REAL ROCKBANDS.....SO IF
YOU WANT THE RAIN SONG.......I GOT THE CONNECTION FOR YOU"
posted by
Star5_
on November 20, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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Outstanding swaying move into peaceful thinking,freedoms soul.You have done a great job again>Kudos David
posted by
merkie
on November 20, 2008 at 1:58 PM
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Hi I agree with Troosha...and I know Freedom's Soul
This is so pretty. Thanks for sharing your lovely gifts...
posted by
mysteria
on November 20, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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Smitten
I liked how you carefully place thinking about you throughout the piece. It makes the reader stop and share your silent pause.
posted by
Troosha
on November 20, 2008 at 10:24 AM
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