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Grand work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 11, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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Rising the bar! It was deep home driven and touching. Ending man oh man!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 10, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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breath-taking poem/story. glad you're back!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 23, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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Welcome Back!!!
And thanks for sharing such an epic quest
posted by
lionreign
on November 21, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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Oh my goodness! I am so happy to be reading your wonderful poetry again! I have missed you so much! How have you been other than real busy!? sam
posted by
sam444
on November 21, 2008 at 2:03 AM
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"A tiny point of promised dawn..." Outstanding.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 20, 2008 at 11:10 PM
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Joseph!!!! Welcome back from me too... I have missed you so much! This poem was wonderful...scary and haunting but loved the end... coming home to your love whom illuminated your path with just the light of her love :-) ... the triumph of light over darkness... Excellent.
posted by
Sinome
on November 20, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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Welcome back. Good to read your lines again. I like the movement in your poem and the love light leading you to your loved one.Excellent expression.
posted by
merkie
on November 20, 2008 at 8:37 PM
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