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Yes
You nailed it! 
posted by
blueyes_ny
on December 2, 2008 at 11:51 AM
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Yes
You
posted by
blueyes_ny
on December 2, 2008 at 11:51 AM
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Human connect touching on the bases of humanity Planting Seeds!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 29, 2008 at 2:24 PM
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Wow!
I couldn't have said it better!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 22, 2008 at 9:07 PM
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You are an angel!!!!! Thank you so very much! 
sam
posted by
sam444
on November 22, 2008 at 5:09 PM
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Oh! I got what you meant big time and I wish I would have written this one! A most excellent idea, intent and purpose. It has nothing to do with the form for me. I study forms of poetry and I would classify this as free verse. This means it is rhythmical but non-metrical, non rhyming lines. [This to answer the first comment: these may have a deliberate rhythm or cadence but seem to disappoint reader's expectation for a formal metre such as iambic pentameter.] I was thrilled and no way disappointed. In fact I just added you to my favorite list and I don't want to miss another poem. You write the way you want and what you want POET!!!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 22, 2008 at 1:41 PM
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Thanks for sharing.......
A good read.....yes, our country is losing its collective mind........I hear the "Check for Cash" places are running low, too.
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on November 22, 2008 at 3:49 AM
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jfm
you would first have to intentionaly pull your head from your ass to understand my intent
posted by
RITE2SPIN
on November 22, 2008 at 12:54 AM
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Your protestations are quite in order. Others will have to FEEL it before they wake up!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 21, 2008 at 10:44 PM
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Somehow lost meter ot intent. Was this tongue in cheek?
posted by
jfm32
on November 21, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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