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You say so many things in so few words. Beautifully done.
posted by
calia14
on November 24, 2008 at 9:11 PM
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My sincere thanks to all my friends here. God bless.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 24, 2008 at 6:15 PM
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Superb! :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 24, 2008 at 4:53 PM
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Great post, hardilaziz. Well done.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 24, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 24, 2008 at 9:04 AM
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Bahoot khoobsurut :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 24, 2008 at 9:02 AM
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Yet, another masterpiece!
Excellent poem.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 24, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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Sounds so sad yet it is almost like a wonderful romance....
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 24, 2008 at 7:46 AM
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Sometimes it runs away
sad!
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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Short..to the point and true,
I don't believe in white picket fences anymore. If you see one it's only make believe.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 23, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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Great verse ....
posted by
afzal50
on November 23, 2008 at 4:21 PM
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It sounds like love to me
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 23, 2008 at 3:46 PM
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You write excellent poetry.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 23, 2008 at 9:11 AM
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