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Exquisite imagery! I just had to fall into it one more time! Love you with the stars above that shine brightly! Sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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Why do I feel lucid in this poem when when I'm never sure where I am?
It seems to have an implied base of perception (but who am I to pry?).
Yet, none of that seems to matter after I'm wisked off into the Archetypal while you are announcing your new ratios (something about men and women). More interesting still, is this thrill of heights, and looking down, noticing why in this poem the concrete is vague, and perhaps nondescript tho integrally related. And then to come down again--hey there is an earth! What a ride; let's do it agian!
posted by
jfm32
on November 27, 2008 at 2:03 PM
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I enjoyed every line I became vivid with it you stepped up.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 26, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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To have a romance like that...What a beautiful work of art this is...Powerful and a true pleasure to read!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 25, 2008 at 6:34 PM
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for the child that loved you is now the woman who holds
your memory in the space of her heart where the
fine memories--the most precious memories, are stored
What an awesome ending! Other than that I am speechless! Happy Thanksgiving my dear Sinome! I will catch up with you on Friday! Love you so!! xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on November 25, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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the climax of your memories holds no bounds
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 25, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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A beautiful tribute to ...
... love - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on November 25, 2008 at 12:04 PM
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Lovely
Especially the conclusion.
posted by
malcolm
on November 25, 2008 at 8:57 AM
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Truly Beautifull Sinome!! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 25, 2008 at 8:56 AM
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..you leave me speechless...
...all I can do is throw flowers..
posted by
MasonGarrett
on November 25, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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So wonderful
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on November 25, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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Wow - what an outpouring of introspection and emotion! You must feel exhausted or renewed after writing a poem like this....
You spill your emotions out to us with such raw honesty, tenderness, and ease.
posted by
Troosha
on November 25, 2008 at 8:07 AM
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Wonderful, Sinome.
An epic.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 25, 2008 at 8:06 AM
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Incredible
This is a wonder and a delight - superb poem which just got printed and put on my fridge
posted by
lionreign
on November 25, 2008 at 7:47 AM
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TO SHARE THE WEIGHT OF TEARS, YOU HAVE A KIND HEART, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 25, 2008 at 6:53 AM
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Profound and nostalgic ...
posted by
afzal50
on November 25, 2008 at 5:56 AM
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What a wonderful poem.
Very enjoyable.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 24, 2008 at 11:10 PM
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achingly beautiful and brings back the memories of that painful first love
I met him years later. He was nothing like I remembered.
posted by
Kabu
on November 24, 2008 at 9:39 PM
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Wow!
Yeah Wow!
posted by
Whacky
on November 24, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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Princess Marta, your mythical prince to have these qualities
" ... your mind containing all
present and ancient knowledge and depth,
which woman, as woman, cannot know", and
"human and holy
until love explodes in a million blazing lights
of wonder and tired release" ..... this desert prince here finds brilliantly beautiful reminiscences. Take care of you xoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 24, 2008 at 6:57 PM
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Very cool.......
Goosebumps, (bold and strong, Luscious depth).
posted by
mindopensup
on November 24, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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