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What love got to do with it? What's love but second hand emotion! Awsome!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 6, 2008 at 8:27 AM
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Powerful work!
posted by
Katray2
on November 30, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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This is good ... and very realistic. I think this was my patient the other night. The doctors held all his medication and when I checked on him, he wasn't sleeping. He looked puzzled, looked at me and asked me "Can you tell me who I am?" The medication for so long had become who he was. Thank you.
posted by
robinrn
on November 29, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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I like how it is circular, one end meeting the other! Great imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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interesting, how the closing line...
is like an opener...
posted by
Sudanym_
on November 28, 2008 at 7:24 PM
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CERTAINLY EXCELLENT! imo...
But then i'm a small froggish man...
posted by
Sudanym_
on November 28, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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Ruby, your rhythmic lines gently push forth a harsh truth.
posted by
calia14
on November 28, 2008 at 1:45 PM
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I like this
posted by
Lanetay
on November 28, 2008 at 9:36 AM
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Very well done...I know a couple people like that!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 28, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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Ruby
Interesting piece – the “pill” now missing there must be re-introductions (if I understood correctly). Nicely done….
posted by
Troosha
on November 28, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Well done indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 28, 2008 at 5:38 AM
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very nicely done my dear!
many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 28, 2008 at 5:03 AM
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