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An inner smile can change everything and
we were not meant to carry this weight of pain that will entertwine our souls to this suitcase we call a body with it's chains. I hope the emotions that come through your words are weakening the chains on your spirit so that you will fly at will and leave a smile in your body to heal.
posted by
skye08
on November 29, 2008 at 7:34 AM
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Self knowledge....
....is the most difficult to obtain, in that we are pulled away from our true selves by the expectations of others from the time we're born.
I love your new style and your images harmonize with your words to great effect.
posted by
metalrat
on November 28, 2008 at 12:02 PM
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The masks we wear that hide us from our pain. It seems we never truly know who, or what we are. Beautifully expressed.
posted by
pernesegirl1
on November 28, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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There is some much here Jen....I feel a certian affinity to this...As if I am staring in a mirror too....Hope you are doing ok...Take care Jen I love this new style of yours!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 28, 2008 at 9:51 AM
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Human connect what insight the useage of the mirror.
This piece is base touching I use the mirror in a song. When I look in the mirror what do I see the reflection of me. Not quite sure, human curious. Nice.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 28, 2008 at 9:21 AM
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How sad, but always a
for you.... Yes, like your new style!
posted by
Troosha
on November 28, 2008 at 8:12 AM
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Love this new style you are experimenting with... Its very avant garde... Great poem as well..Like the Phoenix you are rising again my sweet Jen... Love to watch it and share your triumph with you. xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 28, 2008 at 7:38 AM
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Great reflection ..
posted by
afzal50
on November 28, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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