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Great piece did you let him back to have more soaked shoes, just checking!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 6, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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Ruby, this is a very dissecting write! Great job!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 2, 2008 at 12:17 AM
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posted by
merkie
on December 1, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 1, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 1, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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What a great reversal to send a most poignant message! It is truly an awesome poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 1, 2008 at 2:08 PM
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Like the shoes soaked with tears image
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on December 1, 2008 at 12:42 PM
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It looks like you*ve lost your rhythm in this relationship.
posted by
BC-A
on December 1, 2008 at 12:18 PM
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I could feel the anxiety in my stomach! The agitation and anticipation of fearing that person will leave you again. Ah yes haven't we all been there. You captured it well.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 1, 2008 at 11:20 AM
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Ruby
VERY creative… the soaked shoes, the shrinking feet, the muffled song. Enjoyed it all!
posted by
Troosha
on December 1, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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Stand tall in these shoes....for you have captured the essence of heartache so well!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 1, 2008 at 7:35 AM
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Strong message here my friend
very well said; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 1, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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Stand up in those shoes and point to the door...well done, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 1, 2008 at 6:13 AM
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