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Great piece. How did you come up with your concepts.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 3, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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More!
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:29 AM
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Beautiful and so rhytmic!!! Kudos
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 2, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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JUST BEAUTIFUL, SUCH BEAUTIFUL PHRASING, I LOVED IT, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 2, 2008 at 4:12 PM
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A poignant and expressive poem. Lovely.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 2, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Let your breath hold my reality and coax me to forget! Poignant plea for comfort! I really liked the close! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 2, 2008 at 9:36 AM
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I agree totally with Troosha
Fantastic poem overall, but that line grabs the attention and makes you sit up and take notice
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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Ruby
Like Calia this line really popped out at me: "Let me lie on your tongue as your words I carress" The poem certainly describes the pursuit of comfort…..
posted by
Troosha
on December 2, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 2, 2008 at 7:15 AM
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This is most beautiful my friend!
such a peaceful flow and wonderful imagery; very well done; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 2, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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Lovely and poignant work
posted by
Katray2
on December 2, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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rubypoem
That was pretty-I like the lines "Let me lie on your tongue
As your words I carress"
I wish I could comfort you, but today my optimism's at an all-time low. Now that I think of it, maybe you'll see the humor, though.
posted by
calia14
on December 2, 2008 at 6:20 AM
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