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Hi the purple Jen
This is the second time I have come to read this so remarkable poem, and do take my blessings for such a lovely contribution. Hope allis well with yp and do give your cell no for Sid to talk brfore he leaves for his holidays. Love to you and Jeff and Stan and Shae
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 2, 2008 at 9:57 PM
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Stunning work dear Jen...A most excellent write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 2, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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Hello stun in you moviation your words continue dazzle my mind!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 2, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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A lovely poem....
....of a courageous life journey.
posted by
metalrat
on December 2, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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Very interesting--parallel stanzas, or two poems reflecting eachother? As I read 2nd stanza (or parallel) felt I could be reading a poem that could also stand alone--perhaps two verions of intitial intent/insight--or, if it had been written a usual vertical (poem in 2 stanzas) we might have missed the uniqueness of this study--that space and time are the silent partners in our dramas. Oh, do I feel you smiling again, and what next, a cameo? And since I missed the nail again--it's kind of like art becomes what it is when it can steal your breath away by exhalting the common place to a simple vision. Other than that, I guess there are other ways to have fun.
posted by
jfm32
on December 2, 2008 at 6:18 PM
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This is quite amazing PurpleMermaid! Chris.
(ps.Thanks for leaving your card so often)
posted by
Scramble
on December 2, 2008 at 1:37 PM
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WOW!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 2, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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