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Re: Merkie
Thank you - I am rather proud of this little experiment
posted by
lionreign
on December 4, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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Excellent .You play with the reader in questions and her response is sublime.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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Re: Winged
Thank you - I am glad you enjoyed it so much. I confess that the idea for the form came from old folk tales and the structure they often use, but it was much more effective than I expected.
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Re: Excellent presentation Lion
Thanks Mariaki! I am very glad that you enjoyed this one
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:21 AM
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Re: Soul_Builder101
thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:21 AM
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Re: Sam444
thank you! I thought I would try something a little different and this sort of popped out
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:21 AM
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Re: Wow
thanks malcolm! I must admit that I do value the sharing of another's creativity (say a song or a poem) for the perspectives you can share with your loved ones, but to actually speak your mind and heart you really need to use words of your own.
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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Re: Lion
I can't think of anything better
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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Re: Hardilaziz
Thanks - I agree completely there
posted by
lionreign
on December 3, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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Wonderful. It snowballed me. I got more
interested as I read and read. Couldn't
wait til I got to the end!Bravo
posted by
Winged
on December 3, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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Excellent presentation Lion
cleverly done; imaginative and well written; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 3, 2008 at 5:32 AM
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Excellent poem! Very well crafted!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 2, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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I love how you set this up and built from there! Genius, I say, genius! The words are very well placed for an effective meaning as well! One huge bravo too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 2, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Wow
Very wise words indeed; a point about reality effectively made. Great
posted by
malcolm
on December 2, 2008 at 10:29 AM
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Lion
Awww….now that’s a fabulous answer to receive. She wants you to just be you. What more could you ask for?
posted by
Troosha
on December 2, 2008 at 9:52 AM
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Your poem stands out for the lesson it offers. Love is all about sincerity.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 2, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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