Go to Songs of Mermaid (Poetry)
- Add a comment
- Go to Innocence just like 'greed' it kills...
Fantastic poem
Excellent work, once again.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 4, 2008 at 8:46 PM
| link to this | reply
I'm back and your poetry is the first I looked at, I just love your work.
posted by
Brickhouse
on December 4, 2008 at 2:59 PM
| link to this | reply
Awsome! That's deep a jewel to change human thoughts setting Unity!
Your work outstanding to know is a blessing giving me courage to trust we are the furture the young poets can grow here learn to love themselves. Wow! The way you put this together magic in saddness the eagles cry for hope and change.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 4, 2008 at 12:53 PM
| link to this | reply
excellent content !
posted by
merkie
on December 4, 2008 at 9:54 AM
| link to this | reply
A broken heart bleeds until there is something to mend it...A superb tribute Dear Jen..
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 3, 2008 at 6:48 PM
| link to this | reply
Yes it's TRAGIC-how the innocent become the victims of evil beings- because
of their greed and hatred for humanity! A Brilliant-tho'desperately sad-piece Purple Mermaid! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 3, 2008 at 1:26 PM
| link to this | reply
Humanity bleeds with every drop of innocent blood .
posted by
afzal50
on December 3, 2008 at 9:31 AM
| link to this | reply
Innocence is indeed a victim of evil..
..but also the sweet light of hope and faith..my prayers for
perseverance and preservation.. Powerfully expressed, Dear Friend!..
posted by
Katray2
on December 3, 2008 at 7:20 AM
| link to this | reply