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Great imagery of heatfelt heartbeats! Wow to not a crush!
posted by
merkie
on December 10, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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Humnn...reaches me but doesn.'t grab me
posted by
jfm32
on December 5, 2008 at 6:33 PM
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Nice poem great content touch base and the ending Blam!! For real.
I have a poem with the same title I have not posted it. I'll let you know in a comment I'll read all your work here and there as long as you post I'll read.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 5, 2008 at 1:33 PM
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Very powerful
Love your description! You can feel the passion, great job.
posted by
blueyes_ny
on December 5, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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