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Sweet and full of warmth.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 12, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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You are off the chain out the yard down the street. You are a trip. Awsome!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 11, 2008 at 6:56 PM
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guess you're in love
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 11, 2008 at 4:18 AM
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Hahaha, this is terrfic...best i've seen in this style...very well-done!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 10, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Bravo!!!
I love a twist at the end and you definitely gave me that! Thank you for sharing this work of genius
posted by
lionreign
on December 10, 2008 at 7:30 AM
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Contact lens!
Oh you trickster, you had me fooled! What a hilarious ending!!
posted by
calia14
on December 9, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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Spinning in love and dancing in bliss. Romanctic pleas to fulfillment
posted by
merkie
on December 9, 2008 at 4:35 PM
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Very nice work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 9, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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OUTSTANDING!!!!! I was wrapped up in what I thought was a grand love poem with a wonderful rhyme scheme and then the joyfully I get the awesome ending! You are a marvelous poet! You leave me wanting more and more! KUDOS to the nth degree! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 9, 2008 at 1:51 PM
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