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Depression is something I know all too well about.
thanks jen just catching up on life. you have a way. that always makes me feel good inside.rhea
posted by
muley12
on December 12, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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Tempting
Your poem is tempting all the senses. It's highly seductive and evocative. A lovely piece.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 12, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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beautiful
posted by
skye08
on December 12, 2008 at 8:07 AM
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Purple Mermaid, u are superb!
posted by
Straightforward
on December 12, 2008 at 7:04 AM
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Hey, hey, Mermaid!
Lucky is he who will ultimately do this for you! Good work!
posted by
strat
on December 12, 2008 at 6:29 AM
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You are truly very profound and express your thoughts so well .
posted by
afzal50
on December 12, 2008 at 3:53 AM
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Encore! You grab mind, please my heart and temp my soul. Beautiful!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 11, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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Ah Jen... just fantastically done... Wine and love what better subjects !!! Lovely poem my friend.. written by a lovely poetess. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 11, 2008 at 9:21 PM
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wow, what a pretty!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 11, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Liked how you slowed the blinking lights down, and I had a good read>
Still getting this feeling I'm riding on the seat of my pants. Exquisit vulgarity of Art, turning all my preconceptions inside out...not that I'd like it for wall paper, which is why a gallery exists. Instictive, opressive, uniquely original, and troublesome to any preconception of Art.
posted by
jfm32
on December 11, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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Sensual and lilting work!
posted by
Katray2
on December 11, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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Oooh so tempting!
Your making me want a glass of wine and its only 1pm! Hey, I have the day off, maybe...after all, its rainy, yucky, and I'm home with my hubby...
posted by
calia14
on December 11, 2008 at 9:56 AM
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