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Now you are getting the brain waves stirred.

posted by Mystereo on December 28, 2008 at 12:53 AM | link to this | reply

Love will come these words leave me feeling positive.

posted by Kabu on December 14, 2008 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

Astounding! It stopped me in my tracks it was so wonderful! sam

posted by sam444 on December 14, 2008 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

I love this
So much said in so few words.  Fantastic

posted by lionreign on December 14, 2008 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Agreed the first step into self-love and the loss of lonliness..Bravo!

posted by Wigopa_ on December 14, 2008 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

Neat expression . The first step away from lonely!

posted by merkie on December 14, 2008 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

hardilaziz ~.~
I truly like this -- the matter of taking the next step. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on December 14, 2008 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply