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Amazing write for humans to combine hearts in form of celebration.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 4, 2009 at 5:30 PM
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Re: Smittenheimer
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on December 19, 2008 at 6:37 AM
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I loved the poem, it reminded of the itunes visualizer. Very nice work
posted by
Smittenheimer
on December 18, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Re: rubypoem
Thank you and bless you!!! That is exactly what I was aiming for partly out of fun, and partly to gently point out that the worlds of Carol Singing and Raves have more in common than they might at first believe. It is funny how much of both events is a celebration of life and spirit (no I am not a raver... I just try to remain open minded and not be put off by the bad apples)
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 8:00 AM
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Re: sam444
now I really feel I have written something good - for you to come back to re-read it is rather special.
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 7:57 AM
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Re: Lion
They do, although it has no formal name. I like to attend because they always have superb fireworks when the lights are first lit
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Merkie
I am so glad you enjoyed it - I did have fun with this poem
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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Re: sam444
thank you - I was trying to deliberately make the end ambiguous, partly for my own amusement and partly to highlight the emotional similarities between so many forms of entertainment or celebration
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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Re: A timely piece my dear Lion
Thank you, Mariaki - I thought there should be one or two Christmas ones in there this year
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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'tis the season to be jolly'.a wonderful picture you 'painted' here.the end took me by surprise actually, i thought perhaps a 'rave' party, but still new to reading such wonderful poetry.thank you for the read!
posted by
rubypoem
on December 17, 2008 at 10:59 PM
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I had to come in and read again since I saw it here! It is just delightful! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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Lion
The small town I live in has an evening called “light-up”; the switch it thrown at 7:00 PM and Main Street comes to life with lights and glitter. Your poem captured this annual event for me… I'm guessing you must live somewhere where they do something similar.
posted by
Troosha
on December 17, 2008 at 8:49 AM
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Wow A superb celebration! Let's join in shall we? Thanks for sharing this lion you have build a bonfire of excitement and joy!
posted by
merkie
on December 17, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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How very cool! I was so into the imagery and all along wondering where I would end up and what an awesome surprise. Such a fantastic poem! I love it to pieces. Striking imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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A timely piece my dear Lion
excellent imagery here my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 17, 2008 at 3:23 AM
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