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Breathtaking words and visuals. Kudos Mermaid Encore!
posted by
merkie
on December 21, 2008 at 10:29 AM
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Hey En...My dad SFJoseph....tried to comment on this and he just wanted to say "Fantastic write"!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:14 AM
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Wow!
That is awesome
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posted by
Whacky
on December 19, 2008 at 11:15 PM
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A beautifully creative choice and presentation love.
posted by
BC-A
on December 19, 2008 at 10:53 PM
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our prayers are with you. love you
posted by
muley12
on December 19, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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wow you are really growing with your poems and effects, I cant figure out how you figure all this out
posted by
Lanetay
on December 19, 2008 at 9:11 PM
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She could go all the way! Outstanding what a Master Piece you are always.
Always after my heart, waving my mind and you know you warm my soul. God blessed!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 19, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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What a vivid presentation - both in words and display. You have a lucid and creative mind.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 19, 2008 at 3:06 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 19, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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Splendid work indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on December 19, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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Excellent presentation my dear Jen
although I found the words changed too quickly? many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 19, 2008 at 4:47 AM
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Really nice! All I can say is WOW!
posted by
adnohr
on December 19, 2008 at 2:40 AM
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Astounding visuals!
And the verse is so enchanting - excellent work!..
posted by
Katray2
on December 18, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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DREAMY!
what a wonderful surprise to wait and see what will appear on the screen, and then.......oh!!so beautiful, and the way the 'sparkles' soak up the words, you supply us with a visionary delight.and your writing is soft, touching, and heartfelt - 'manoeuvred by the light of her heart' 'gentlest clouds clothe the roughness of her path' - how beautiful a dream was created.lovely.thank you.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 18, 2008 at 10:56 PM
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Truly marvelous work dear Jen..
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 18, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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