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Even whe you are plating you have great creativity.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 1, 2009 at 2:55 PM
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This poem is just too cute! I had to read it again! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 25, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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A delicious platter indeed!

posted by
merkie
on December 22, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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Yes it is! I loved the onomatopoeia too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 19, 2008 at 6:53 PM
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But the answer never known simply grows fatter. This is just he best line ever! There are infinite possibilities in this one little line. This is a wonderfully fun little piece. I laughed out loud in finishing the read. Thank you for nudging my long, lost funny bone! Bravo to you.
posted by
asign
on December 19, 2008 at 4:03 PM
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A tongue twister? Says a lot.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 19, 2008 at 3:02 PM
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Ruby
A delicious platter, indeed!
posted by
Troosha
on December 19, 2008 at 7:58 AM
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SOUNDS LIKE A FEAST , THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 19, 2008 at 7:33 AM
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Yummm....the suspense makes it even more delicious!
posted by
Straightforward
on December 19, 2008 at 6:56 AM
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I love the pace and cadence of this
It's so engaging and fun
posted by
lionreign
on December 19, 2008 at 6:49 AM
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rubypoem ~.~
...such a delightful piece. I truly enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 19, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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I really enjoyed it ruby.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 19, 2008 at 4:19 AM
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Aint it just my friend!
lovely and light for the start of a great weekend! Many blessings and thanks; enjoy yours
posted by
mariaki
on December 19, 2008 at 3:53 AM
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Very engaging and lyrical!
posted by
Katray2
on December 18, 2008 at 11:25 PM
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Such fun! I like the flitter-flutter effect.
posted by
calia14
on December 18, 2008 at 11:21 PM
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