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oh! wow! all said in so litttle
posted by
bythewindowsill
on February 5, 2009 at 9:17 AM
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keep writing!!! you have a lovely gift!!
posted by
Itza
on January 29, 2009 at 4:56 PM
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Can I share a post Seeds 3rd poem 3rd page i'll read whn you post thank you
posted by
Mystereo
on January 24, 2009 at 6:56 PM
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Good work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 22, 2008 at 1:19 PM
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Intriguing and imaginative!
posted by
Katray2
on December 22, 2008 at 11:18 AM
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that is a lot of power and impact
for so few words. I like this a lot, it makes me think and I agree with Sam444 - that is always a good thing
posted by
lionreign
on December 22, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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I liked this! It got me thinking and that is always a good thing! Thank you! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 20, 2008 at 10:11 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 20, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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Nice ....thanks
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 20, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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Yes, if you are expressing your delight with kids.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 20, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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Gift of the pen use create worldsand release pressure fromthe soul venting.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 20, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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Hi there
This poem immediately brought to mind when my children were small and we had little - yet no matter how difficult the times, their voices would always hold me. We always loved each other. Thank you for evoking that memory.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 20, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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