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You have to pull the wool i did not know what to think, delightful!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 1, 2009 at 2:54 PM
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This gave me goosebumps! Thank you so much for sharing this!
posted by
RASSE
on December 30, 2008 at 6:35 PM
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Incredible imagery!
You are an amazingly talented poet! Thank you for a lovely read.

posted by
LadyGhost1970
on December 30, 2008 at 12:19 PM
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What an awesome refrain and poignant close! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 25, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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very inspiring and the style unique
posted by
mysteria
on December 23, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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Beautiful as always!!!!!!!! luv yeah and happy holidays!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 23, 2008 at 6:25 AM
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Beautiful work
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 23, 2008 at 5:13 AM
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Deep and meaningful work!
posted by
Katray2
on December 22, 2008 at 11:02 AM
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Well done! many points to ponder.

posted by
merkie
on December 22, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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The simile's are simply so accurate
posted by
Straightforward
on December 22, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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Exquisite piece my friend
fine imagery and very well written; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 22, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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interesting
I love the style and it has left me with a very clear image... I love the inherent metaphor of it - it's making me think (it seems to be a day for it)
posted by
lionreign
on December 22, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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VERY NICELY WRITTEN, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 22, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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