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Tragically beautiful. Great ending!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 13, 2009 at 7:33 AM
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Seem as if you missing someone and the missing piece, without it no home.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 24, 2008 at 2:34 PM
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A house is not a home....
...without love in it. Lovely and poignant.
posted by
metalrat
on December 23, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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cpklapper ~.~
Beautifully written, this poem tinged with sadness. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 23, 2008 at 7:42 PM
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little lonesome blues. Well done!
posted by
merkie
on December 23, 2008 at 4:39 PM
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BEAUTIFUL poem..love it
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 23, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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