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OOOHHH the ebb-and -flow of emotion! Heartfelt, this one! In love with the first stanza!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 12, 2009 at 11:38 AM
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Re: Such beauty in your words my dear Lion
Not in a bad way, I hope, my friend? thank you for reading
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:55 AM
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Re: Moving words
Thank you rubypoem, I am glad this poem translated my feelings so well. You have a weekend of unexpected joy and beauty
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:54 AM
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Re: soul_Builder101
Thank you SB
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you - the sea is not so common an image for me... but then I rarely see it
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:51 AM
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Re: Vividly expressive!
Thanks Ash
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:51 AM
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Re: beautiful......
Thank you 9STAR
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:51 AM
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Re: Calia14
Thank you, it is that season at which I am at my lowest ebb and my poetry often reflects my inner melancholy, but in a few short weeks the season of valour and bright hope shall start and my words shall once more leap and whirl in gently perfumed dance.
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:37 AM
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Re: Riversidepoet
Thank you, Kent, and that is a beautiful song
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:35 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you! hugs
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2009 at 6:34 AM
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Such beauty in your words my dear Lion
this has thrown me into wistfulness........ many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 9, 2009 at 3:30 AM
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Moving words
the ebb and flow of this is wonderful.very touching with a gentle sadness. how lonely we would be without love on that vast blue sea.thank you for the read.have a wonder filled week-end.
posted by
rubypoem
on January 9, 2009 at 12:16 AM
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Sounds good and fair!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 8, 2009 at 10:00 PM
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I love the sea and emotions intertwined! This is a fabulous example too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 8, 2009 at 8:54 PM
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Vividly expressive!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 8, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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beautiful......
posted by
Star5_
on January 8, 2009 at 6:50 PM
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Such a melancholy poem! Beautiful and touching, but I hope your heart is cheered with the outlet!
posted by
calia14
on January 8, 2009 at 10:40 AM
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THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTFELT, AS I READ THE PART ABOUT NEEDLESS PAIN, I COULDN'T HELP BUT THINK OF THE OLD HYMN "WHAT A FRIEND WE HAVE IN JESUS" WHICH SAYS OH WHAT PEACE WE OFTEN FORFEIT, OH WHAT NEEDLESS PAIN WE BEAR, ALL BECAUSE WE DO NOT CARRY, EVERYTHING TO GOD IN PRAYER. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM, THANKS , KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 8, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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Very descriptive write Lion. Rocking on the ocean of deprssion . Needing rest and restoration to regain momentum! Hugs
posted by
merkie
on January 8, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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Find the rocking movement and take the comfort of rest. Restore that energy and resume being the friend we love the best!
Very descriptive write Lion .Well done.
posted by
merkie
on January 8, 2009 at 9:44 AM
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